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I am dedicated to studying in building surveying as it has provided the opportunities for me to acquired specialised skills in building technology, operating advanced instruments in construction which is I'm really interest and suit me most. Can you imagine if you have the opportunity to serve buildings to find out the defects which have chance to collapse or doesn’t meet the safety standard, being a building surveyor you can minimize the chances of accidents and save life. I hope to be a building surveyor and participate of it.


I have deep interest in physics and mathematics and also the building constructions. Once I have had the experience of attending Intelligent Sensing Technology at the HKUST Summer Institute. Apart from that, I usually explore this kind of matters from different sources such as magazines, books and essay through websites during my free time. The most fascinating things is learning how to plan, design and sketch a building structure before actual build up a new building as well as to be a professional in building services and construction.


I am an outgoing person and enjoy interacting with others in order to broaden my social network and I always captured some new and innovative ideas during the conversation. Apart from that, I am the person who is highly respect on teamwork, as the old saying goes 'Teamwork makes the dream work', every person have their own specialties so we have to co-operate with each other in order to complement each other and work effectively. Furthermore, I am pretty optimistic, I understand that life always meet obstacles and low times, it is inevitable ,so I accepted and live with it.


when I was a committee member of my school's Interact Club, I used to participate in planning and hold activities for serving people in the society such as children, elderly and descendants of a few nationalities , I have acquired the various skills for serving specific type of people as well as sharpen the organize skills and communication skills especially work with the members from other schools.


I follow the target of my study and try to go with the right track to achieve it, other than study in school and I also participate the student guidance team for the lower class students. I enjoy with passion to be a volunteer for the club of serving the society and got the recognition from the social welfare department.


Taking into account of my sociable personality, enjoy innovation and sharing of idea, I believe I am the right candidate. I look forward to study in a advance technical and global knowledge base university.


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